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Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Fight for the orangutan's

For writing this term we are looking at persuasive language. This is an animation to persuade you that the orangutans need protecting. Their environment is being destroyed for the production of Palm Oil We can stop this by not buying products, that contain Palm oil.
By Maddi,Deana and Nikita
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousAugust 23, 2019 at 10:58 AM

    Hi Deana,
    It's Zoe W from Korimako.
    I really liked this animation you did with Maddi and Nikita, because it had a lot of detail which made it enjoyable, also because of the description at the end.
    I can make a connection with this because I am really interested in the Orangutans forest being destroyed and trying to stop it.
    I thourt that was perfect and have no advice for next time.
    Good Job.
    Zoe W

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